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Reviewer: Elpiza Signed [Report This]
Date: 01.19.2010 07:00:33 Title: Illogical

This is really a very vicious cycle, and I'm curious to how you plan to break it^^

Looking forward to your next update.

Elpiza



Author's Response:

Yeah I know eh, I'm also curious how I'm going to do it also. lol. Sort of have an idea how it will end, I never really plot out my stories. (Maybe that is why they jump around a lot) An Idea pops into my head, and I start to write. This story came after, I was debating with myself, how can Batman survive all those nasty beats and near death experiences? Had two ideas for this story and choice this one. The other one was Alfred used clones. This one sounded better.

Working on the next chapter, so it should not be to long.

Thanks for the review Elpiza.

Chaosmob :)

Reviewer: the-lady-isis Signed [Report This]
Date: 01.14.2010 06:49:09 Title: Results

More! More right now please!



Author's Response:

hehehehe you sound like a little child just now Isis. ;) Thanks for the review. I don't know when I will have the next chapter done. Hopefully soon. :)

Chaosmob :)

Reviewer: the-lady-isis Signed [Report This]
Date: 01.09.2010 05:03:52 Title: Chapter 1

:O How did I not know about this? It's really good, and I feel so sorry for Diana and Clark. I can see her breaking down and telling him everything - but then he would probably never speak to either of them again. I loved this, chaos. Only one error I spotted, there was one 'there' which should have been 'their', but that's easy to make. Great story :) 



Author's Response:

Oh because I just wrote it two days ago. ;) (Thanks for the error spotting :P lol) Been kicking around ideas about how Batman can survive all those beatings and near death experiences and came up with this. Was actually thinking about using clones in the story, but having Alfred use the Lazarus Pits chemicals were a better idea. So do you think I should continue writing this story? I'm starting to lean towards continuing it. I could see Diana either avoiding Bruce because of the guilt or confessing it all to him.

Thanks for the review Isis.

Take care.

Chaosmob :)

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