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Interesting so far. Personally, I think that time travel stories are trickey. When used properly, it let's you explore some really interesting plot ideas. What I dislike is when they are used like a reset button. Do a lot of crazy stuff and then say "never mind", kind of like dream stories. Having said that, I like the way that you chose to get Batman and Hippolyta back to the present. I also think throwing Selina in the mix was an interesting idea. There is a sub-plot there waiting to emerge. The only thing I have difficulty with is the young Bruce / old Bruce interaction. If my older self came back in time, I'd damn well listen to what I have to say. I have some trouble believing that it would be any different here.
All-in-all, good so far. I look forward to the next installment.
Hey this is really good so far, please continue this!
Nice cliffhanger and of course Selina come around to help screw things up. Diana is going to think Selina is the woman that Bruce is in love with and he isn't going to correct her. Grrr..Good chapter and I look forward to the next.
Thanks for the review DaisyJane.
Just had to add Selina to the mix. ;) Why would younger Bruce do that? hehehe.
Hey, Good start to your story. As to some input for the story, i'm not really sure at this point, but ur well on track if your listening to Lady Isis, she's one very wise lady. I look forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for the review. Having a little difficulty with chapter 3, chapter 1 and 2 came out without any problem. Yes Lady Isis is very wise, jealous sometimes of her talents and imagination. :)