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Well that was some ending, I liked the little glimpses of the future, it was an interesting way of ending the story. It was sad and happy at the same time.
Thanks. It felt right to end it like that. Allowing us to see how Galatea grew as a person. It was sad what happened to her daughter, and I've been toying with the idea of doing a story over the second generation in this story.
Wow u just keep surprising me. Well Luthor is feeling pretty dumb now, and possibly pretty dead? Can't wait to see what u write next.
Yeah Luthor has realized the mistake of bringing two superpowered beings into the world who think like he does. As for what happens to him it is reveiled in the next chapter. Thanks again for the reviews. They do help fuel the creative process.
Wow, I didn't see that ending coming, area 51, things are really starting to get interesting now. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Thanks :D I got to thinking about it, and I wanted to bring something not done before in Justice League or Justice League Unlimited. Area 51 was never shown, and the closest thing even mentioned was in Question's room on the Watchtower. 'Secret Military Base dealing with Rosewell insident'. It's going to become a fun ride. Plus don't forget Luthor's 'Children'.
Wow, i'm still stunned from chapter 7, so it might be a while til I can form words again. lol. Interesting things are happening all over in this chapter, now to see everyone's reaction when things go even more south. look forward to the next installment.
Aww Thanks. Yeah things are going to go from bad to total chaos before too long. But this is a Justice League/BMWW story. And we know that Bruce will have a plan set back for this. At least we hope that Bruce is going to have a plan for this.
Not sure if u have read this or interested in reading it, but this is a link to the story I was talking about it's by Heybats http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2975420/1/The_Apprentice It's a pretty good read, eventhough it has nothing to do with ur story except for the pairing.
As for your story, from the direction you are heading in, it also sounds like an interesting read. Also I'm trying to get into the habit of reviewing people's work, as I know how fustrating it can be to work so hard at something and not have any feedback. It was recently brought to my attention on another site I frequent, by another author, so I've made it my mission to review when I read or at least aim to a few times in longer stories. sorry that was so long :D
Author's Response: First thanks for reviewing again. The story is taking on a life of its own now. We've got by all rights an indestructible monster trapped at Cadmus, Luthor who has gone off the deep end, and this growing relationship between Dick and Galatea. On top of that the world is trying to adapt to having no Superman. I know that this is going against the grain, but I'm going to be writing a world without Superman in it. The League as it is will have to take care of the world. Thanks again, LF
Jesus Christ, just read all 6 chapters and I have to say that was a whole lot of WOW. Interesting pairing, I think i've only read only one other story with Dick and Galatea, also a BMWW fic as well. Interesting story so far, look forward to the where the story goes.
First thanks for reviewing! It never gets old seeing someone review to a story, and to be honest it is what helps fuel the inspiriation.
To be honest it is an interesting pairing and originally it was going to be a one shot about how Dick woke up beside her, but when I came back to it... It didn't really feel like one. The more i write it the more it actually seems like they could fit together. I like the idea of Dick with Barbara, Kory, or Donna, but Galatea seems to have a certain quality that I believe he would be attracted to.
And has for where the story is going... Well... Since JLU couldn't have a fight between Superman and Doomsday like there was in the comics... Then I'm going to provide it here in the story. and like in the comics it's not going to end pretty.