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Reviewer: lover-enthralled Signed [Report This]
Date: 10.04.2010 06:36:50 Title: Chapter 1

wow that literally brought a tear to my eye....

so wonderful.

it must be so aweful for diana to feel the need to support all of bruce's loved ones and ease their inner turmoil when no one even realises that she is the one in need of the most support...

love the way it's written by the way. especially when you express diana's desperation to undo the past and make things right with bruce by telling him the truth of how she feels for him but she is unable to so she even goes far enough to try to find any substitue for him just to ease her pain and guilt even for a moment. magnificent... just magnificent.

PS. sorry for the long review and the babbling by the way :p



Author's Response:

If you liked it from her POV you should read my story entitled Just Friends.  It's from Bruce and Diana's POV and I think serves as a prequel for this story. 

Reviewer: Chaosmob Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10.04.2010 00:04:37 Title: Chapter 1

Wow Iron Maiden, I'm loving the story so far. Nearly freaked when you suggested she take Dick as a replacement over Bruce. hehehe you naughty girl. ;)

Just one suggestion. When Diana dreams have her see him in his different time periods. That would be so cool!!! :)



Author's Response:

I actually have been playing with something like that.  We'll see how it all turns out. 

Reviewer: Lordfrieza Signed [Report This]
Date: 10.03.2010 21:58:54 Title: Chapter 1

Wow...  Ironmaiden that was wonderful.  I love the beginning.  it's hard to be the one everyone turns to for comfort and then realizing that you have no where to turn to yourself.  Being singled out and forced to realize how lonely it is to be a pillar of strength and truth.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review LF.  There is more coming and the angst will continue for awhile until I figure out exactly how to end this. 

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